i like it... but maybe you should repeat the red somewhere...or maybe not, i don't know...but i think it needs something else i'm just not sure what kirslyn
The colors in this work really well in terms of fitting into its overall composition. The fade coming up from the bottom works (you can't see his feet-interesting..) and I think the ring of white around his head is neat and fits with the sort of horizon you created with the line that goes (almost) straight across the top section w/ different things going on above it.
This looks awesome. The style of the text and the colors are perfect, but I agree with Kirslyn about the red. Maybe vary the size of the text or add other red highlights somewhere.
I like the text, I think the overall composition is really nice and I agree about the fade. I like using the red to highlight look out kid, I wonder if you could use it to highlight things in the zine to look out for?
i like it...
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kirslyn
The colors in this work really well in terms of fitting into its overall composition. The fade coming up from the bottom works (you can't see his feet-interesting..) and I think the ring of white around his head is neat and fits with the sort of horizon you created with the line that goes (almost) straight across the top section w/ different things going on above it.
ReplyDeleteThis looks awesome. The style of the text and the colors are perfect, but I agree with Kirslyn about the red. Maybe vary the size of the text or add other red highlights somewhere.
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I like the text, I think the overall composition is really nice and I agree about the fade. I like using the red to highlight look out kid, I wonder if you could use it to highlight things in the zine to look out for?
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