I love the expressions that you managed to make/capture in these images. It's exaggerated enough to seem funny or satirical but convincing enough to make it believable. I like the first and third images the best because I like to see the relationship between the "destroyer" and that which is being destroyed. Maybe if there was someone jumping on the sign or something I don't know. Also, I think the first one is compositionally the strongest.
I think that the storyline that you're going for is cool and interesting, but I think if some adjustments were made to these they would be that much stronger. I think the lighting in the first one is tough (probably because of the time of day, which is completely understandable), so making it black and white or adjusting the contrast could make it less washed out.
The second one makes me think of those images that Brittany's taken of the painting studio with all of the lines and such, so maybe an angle from above or below would make the image stronger if there were more lines in the frame. With the last one I would just adjust the backdrop because that sort of distracted me but again I understand why that would be hard to avoid.
I love the expressions that you managed to make/capture in these images. It's exaggerated enough to seem funny or satirical but convincing enough to make it believable. I like the first and third images the best because I like to see the relationship between the "destroyer" and that which is being destroyed. Maybe if there was someone jumping on the sign or something I don't know. Also, I think the first one is compositionally the strongest.
ReplyDeleteI think that the storyline that you're going for is cool and interesting, but I think if some adjustments were made to these they would be that much stronger. I think the lighting in the first one is tough (probably because of the time of day, which is completely understandable), so making it black and white or adjusting the contrast could make it less washed out.
ReplyDeleteThe second one makes me think of those images that Brittany's taken of the painting studio with all of the lines and such, so maybe an angle from above or below would make the image stronger if there were more lines in the frame. With the last one I would just adjust the backdrop because that sort of distracted me but again I understand why that would be hard to avoid.
I love the third one. Captured great moment!
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