First of all, I really like how you have a series of related pieces; there is some sort of narrative that is created which I enjoy a lot as a viewer. I am not sure what kind of lighting you used for these, or if it was all naturally light, but they seem a bit muted or something. With such a sparkly mask, I kind of want to see a lot of light bouncing off of it. Maybe that would be distracting though...
I agree with Mariel that these photos are intriguing because of the narrative they create, and that there could be more contrast. I think the angle in the last photo is really interesting - I like the way the bricks guide the viewer's eye across the image. The second photo doesn't really do much for me, though.
First of all, I really like how you have a series of related pieces; there is some sort of narrative that is created which I enjoy a lot as a viewer. I am not sure what kind of lighting you used for these, or if it was all naturally light, but they seem a bit muted or something. With such a sparkly mask, I kind of want to see a lot of light bouncing off of it. Maybe that would be distracting though...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mariel that these photos are intriguing because of the narrative they create, and that there could be more contrast. I think the angle in the last photo is really interesting - I like the way the bricks guide the viewer's eye across the image. The second photo doesn't really do much for me, though.
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